Our task: Our reading group has been working on creating a summarie about the book that we have read an giving eachother feedback on what we could do next time.
How i did it: I created my summarie by adding a text box on the group doc and writing a summarie.
:My summarie:
Isla
This week we had a text called “the Prince and the Albatross Egg”.
It is about some children from two schools who gathered together to create a recording with the prince from wellington and Dunedin. They worked on creating a project of an royal albatross and painted and decorated it. The prince came to Wellington to help and watch the recording about the royal albatross with one tricky question, “ can you eat the Albatross eggs “. The children and teachers were astonished and said that you would never eat an albatross egg because they are so rare in New Zealand because you do not see them much. The Kids watched the TV as it was played so that everybody could see it and that was their plan.
Feedback: I hope you enjoyed taking a look at my summarie about the Prince and the Albatross Egg. I have been working really hard and I would really appreciate it if you gave me some feedback on using correct speech marks and putting my an ' s and a ' s in the right places. Thank you for taking some time to take a look at my work. Thanks.
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